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You have a lot of good information so far. There is a great documentary called, Killing Us Softly 3: Advertising's Image of Women, I think this may help you with your topic. It would be great if you could add a title to your article and possible separate it into more sections such as when you add the oppositional view of women's attitudes due to advertisements.DianeElizabeth66 (talk) 16:26, 13 October 2011 (UTC)
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This article is really well written, and it gets the point across very well. It also lists over 10 sources with actual links to websites which tells me it is pretty reliable. By clicking on the links it takes me to actual pages with also says right off the bat that the information is reliable as well. The main point of the article is stated in the opening of the very first section. This tells me from the start that the article will have some information I may be able to use on the topic i want to know about. The view points are over represented only because there is so much of the same information said in different form, for each section. -- Preceding unsigned comment added by Bhurley18 (talk o contribs) 15:59, 23 March 2016 (UTC)
I really liked how the article portrayed the side of how young teenage men are being affected by the advertisements of an idealized body image as much as young teenage girls are being subjected to it. i also really like how the article addresses the research behind both of these topics. I do not like how the article gets a little off topic by generalizing how advertisements effect people around us because the article is supposed to be specifically targeted toward "teenage" body image. I would suggest adding another element of teenage body image like the specific types of advertisements being presented to the teens, whether it be fashion ads or dieting ads and so forth. -- Preceding unsigned comment added by 8.41.197.223 (talk) 21:16, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
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